Thursday 25 May 2017

That was Hanmer

AO: Language Features
Use a range of language features appropriately, showing an increasing understanding of their effects.

Indicators
uses a range of oral, written, and visual features to create meaning and effect and to sustain interest
uses a range of vocabulary to communicate precise meaning



THAT WAS SUMMER by Marci Ridlon has a very easy frame to use. When we began to look at it deeper we noticed:
  • Starts with a question
  • Has a list of things that don't have to be related
  • After the question in each stanza there are four actions or things happening within the question
  • Senses are used near the end of each stanza
  • Stanzas 1-3 finish with that was summer (repetition)
  • Stanzas 2 & 3 begin with remember the time..?
  • Stanza 4 begins with If you try really hard can you remember...
Begin first with a ZERO DRAFT. This is where only basic keys words are listed. Use a writers palette and add your key words there.

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