If I go west from here.

We have chosen to look at a poem by local poet Greg O'Connell. The poem
has a West Coast feel to it. These are the things we 'noticed'

• That punctuation is not important 
• There are (mostly) 3 lined stanzas
• The 'Frame' has 2 parts
• If I go...If I go...If I go... When I go...
• You will see me in...feel me in...know me in...
• The first stanza has a metaphor (sea blue mine) which is linked to another (coalface)
• The second line of the first 2 stanzas start with verbs
• A preposition (beyond) is repeated on lines 2 & 3 of the 3rd stanza

Link to the poem in drive

Here is Skye's poem. What do you think?

The DRAFT Conversation

Today we looked at budding up and talking through the DRAFT process to make changes to our writing... (hopefully) for the better.